2016年雅思写作模拟试题（二）

有人认为经济援助之重要的，有人认为实际的帮助和建议重要，你的观点是什么?

　　解析题目：2015年6月6日雅思考题中向有需要的国家提供帮助指的是一些国家在遭遇自然灾害，经济危机的时候，应该给他们提供直接的援助，例如医疗队，救援组织或者志愿者。对立方观点经济援助指的是直接的捐助。本题为旧题重新，考察的是国家援助的方式。

　　作家立场：发达国家应该承担对于发展中国家援助的责任。对比经济援助，直接的帮助更加可取可行。

　　首段;背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

　　二段：反方观点的展开：

　　三段：正方观点的展开：

　　It is not rare to see that some well-to-do countries like to give financial aid or other forms of assistance to poor ones. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not economic donation is the best effective means of assistance. Speaking for myself, those developed countries should assume the responsibility of helping those countries, which are still suffering from the agonies of popular disease, poor education and undeveloped trade. However, financial aids have both its merits and demerits， other suitable ways of assistance should be considered.

　　Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that those well-off countries ought to give a financial aid to the poverty-stricken nations’ charities. For a start, it is out of the reason of humanism and could benefit the straitened nations directly. More precisely, financial beneficence from the developed countries could help to accelerate the construction of infrastructure and establishing more houses. Also, when some rich countries donate large sums of money to those needy countries, more job opportunities could be created and thus living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced.

　　Nonetheless, we should be alert to the possible risks of economic assistance. For one thing, it might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. For another, international aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. Apart from financial aids, there are still many other options available to assist the undeveloped nations. One way is by opening up trade barriers, which enables the poor countries to sell their goods. Another way is to forgive economic debts so that the self-supporting ability of the poor nations could be promoted. Eventually, the teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries to take the responsibilities of educational and medical assistance.

　　解析：It is not rare to see that …… 这一点很常见

　　解析：Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not 关于是否应该……，人们持有不同意见

　　解析：Financial aids have both its merits and demerits 经济援助有利有弊

　　解析：Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that 的确，为证明……是合理的，我们是可以找到一些理由的

　　解析：……could benefit the straitened nations directly v可以使贫困国家直接受益

　　解析：Living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced 贫困国家的生活水平可以被提高

　　解析：It might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. 经济援助也许会使贫困国家对于援助国更加依赖

　　解析：International aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. 国际援助也许会带来政治干预和经济掠夺

　　解析：open up trade barriers v开发贸易壁垒

　　解析：forgive economic debts v免除经济债务

　　解析：The teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries 可以向贫困国家派驻教师和医生。